lunes, 29 de agosto de 2016

The last day he saw him

In the writing class, the teacher told us to write a story which had to end with the frase ''That was the last day she/he saw him. My story is this one


                                                   So, where is he?
Larry and Chopin, two very close friends, were in a wonderful amusement park which had food, carnvial, people wearing costumes and many games. They were using their tickets in an easy game in which you have to fill a baloon with water pistol from far place. Everything was perfect. Last summer day, on a sunny day, with your friend couldn't be more perfect. But in an instant Chopin was not near Larry. In an instant everything was silence. Inmediatly, Larry started to look for him. At any place, but he was not there. Lenin looked for him in places they had been before, but even in the bathroom he did not find him. He also was thinking what he would tell his mom. Did he have to mention that he disappeared but then he found him or not? And what if he didn't find him? He is going to look like an idiot. Well but that is not so important now. How can a joyful day turn into a disatrous one. Lenin was crying, but he did not want to call any mom, yes, bad decition. Dear Chopin where are you? Which was the magical place you were hiding? All of a sudden he was no there! Was he a wizard? A horrible day had arrived. So three hours since they did not find Chopin. Chopin, a wonderful blonde with 
blue eyes kid. Many memories that they had together, but, unfortunately, that was the last day he saw him.


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